- Emma, when I glance through the work you have completed so far in your evaluation posts, I am really pleased.
- You have made some really good attempts to be creative and to make posts super visual
- Q.2 - You have made really good use of Prezi for this Emma - Well done. Good written description about what you were trying to do, and good to see pics of George compared to pics from professional products.
ebi:
- I think you need to come back to Q. 1 and develop this more. Good to see you using prezi for this, but all I could see was text - this post really calls for IMAGES - you should take images / screen grabs from 'like' movies that are very similar to your own idea... and then take screen grabs from your own film to compare / contrast how you and your group have set out to mimic the 'look' (certain camera shots / movement... mise en scene ... shot framing... plot line... title - placement and font choice...) I know your group was really influence by the opening for 'Kill Your Friends' - so take screen grabs from this and compare to the similar shots of the messed up room from your own opening - talk about what you were trying to replicate with this (developing viewer interest... sparking Q's in the viewer mind)
Overall effort: EX (Q. 2)... IN (Q.1)
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